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Ophelia’s been successful at hiding her true identity, until the mark of the serpent appears on her neck—a death sentence, should it be seen by anyone in her town. Hiding the mark might save her from falling victim to the witch hunts of her era, but the scorching sensation it carries can’t be ignored.

When the mysterious Ethan is sent to collect her for a life of something more, she learns concealing the mark is the least of her concerns. She’s destined to do a new task—to join a dark, supernatural world and protect the future of people she may never meet.

What she doesn’t know—what she learns too late—is that her initiation won’t be complete until she kills the man who’s captured her heart.

 

Review:

Rebecca Hamilton is an excellent writer. Her first book, “The Forever Girl“, landed one of my sparse Five Star reviews. Hamilton writes gritty paranormal romance with horror elements written in a literary style.

That’s a bagful of genre elements right there but Rebecca Hamilton makes it work. There were times I had to stop reading “Her Sweetest Downfall” because it creeped me out and I needed a happy break. I felt emotions stirring in the gut of my stomach during the peak of the love affair. 
The gothic environment of  “Downfall” reads as sparse yet lovely. Think Anne Rice “Interview with a Vampire” aesthetic but less gory.
Ophelia, main character of “Downfall”, only played a small role in “The Forever Girl.” This new installment takes place 200 years before the first in the series. 
Ophelia has to make a difficult decision. She can wait until the burning mark spells out her death or give up everything, absolutely everything, to play a mysterious role against the people who ordered her parents’ death.
This novella kept me entertained for days. Although short, I didn’t want to finish it too fast! 
Keep in mind this novella is intended as a “gift to the fans of ‘The Forever Girl’ series.” I can tell it didn’t get as deep of an edit in the middle section as it would have if it was a full novel. Totally cool– that leaves more time for Hamilton to keep working on that sequel! 
Because we aren’t as connected to the characters, I’m not as attached to Ophelia as I was to Sophia of “The Forever Girl.” But Sophia’s hard to top. 
If you enjoyed “The Forever Girl”, you’ll love this one, too. A new reader might like to pick this one up as well–but the talk of Strigoi and other terms may be confusing. 

One thing Hamilton may consider is incorporating a brief index of terms in the back–both to make the book accessible to new readers and also for us forgetful fans! 

Her Sweetest Downfall on Amazon

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Special Event: Olympic Readathon Update I

And the Olympic Readthon has begun! This post will be the update thread for my progress towards my goal of 1000 pages read before August 12th.

Friday July 27, 2012

Finished Smashwords Book Marketing Guide (Free)
39 Pages

-This is a great book for everyone interested in publishing a book, and a great pair to Mark Coker’s other freebie Secrets to Ebook Publishing Success. Both are written by the creator of Smashwords. 4 Stars.

Reading Secrets of Successful Writers (Free)

9 Pages
   Saturday July 28, 2012
Reading Her Sweetest Downfall by Rebecca Hamilton (Forever Girl Journals) (.99) 55%-90%
33 Pages

 

Reading Secrets of Successful Writers (Free) 10-22%
31 Pages

Total Olympics => 11.2% goal completion
Sunday July 29, 2012
14 Pages
Reading Secrets of Successful Writers (Free) 22-28%
11 pages
Total 15 Pages Today
Total Olympics => 12.7% goal completion
Monday July 30, 2012

Finished Her Sweetest Downfall by Rebecca Hamilton
9 Pages

Reading Secrets of Successful Writers (Free) 10-22%
2 Pages

Began Paramount by Nadia Scrieva (Free for a short time!) 0-8%
30 Pages

Total 41 Pages Today
Total Olympics => 16.9% goal completion

Tuesday July 31, 2012
 
Reading How to Revise Your Novel Course by Holly Lisle (Currently Reformatting)– 10 Pages
Reading Scientific American Mind — 7 Pages
Reading Paramount — 10 Pages
Reading Secrets of Successful Writers — 42 Pages
Reading Blogs on the Internet like The Book Designer (see left) — 15 Pages
Total 84 Pages Today
Total Olympics => 25.2% goal completion
Thursday August 1, 2012
Reading Blogs on the Internet like The Book Designer
30 PagesReading  Labyrinth by Kate Moss

22 Pages
Total 52 Pages Today
Total Olympics => 30.4% goal completion

For more about the Olympic Readathon and how you can join:

 

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 A new age is coming…The King will come…and he will rule forever in Avalon. Through the generations the women of Avalon prepare for the coming of the Defender, the sacred king who will guard the old ways of the Britons and save their land from destruction. On the holy isle of Avalon, hidden in the mists between the world of Faerie and the world of men, they wait.

For High Priestess Caillean, facing the Roman foe, salvation comes not through victory, but bitter sacrifice. Two hundred years later her successor, Dierna, faces a new enemy: the Saxon hordes who assail her people like savages.

By the time of Viviane, Britain seems wholly lost. But a Merlin is made amongst the Druids once more, and the day of the Defender, who will come to be known as Arthur, draws close.A spellbinding historical fantasy, Lady of Avalon links the bestselling novels in the Avalon series-The Forests of Avalon and The Mists of Avalon.

I cannot finish this book, which I have in audiobook form. 
 
Three stories make up this book. The first I found unremarkable. I gave up halfway into the second.
I really wanted to read this book, because I loved the Mists of Avalon and Zimmer Bradley is very well renowned as an author.
It’s a tomb on my shelf sitting unread so I hoped an audiobook would make it more accessible. It wasn’t
The reading is by a well spoken woman who follows the steady tone of the book faithfully. This is a problem with the book—very heavy and not very exciting.
I couldn’t finish because I lost interest in the characters. Teleri, the main character ceased to be likeable to me. She lost everything she was when she agreed to leave Avalon.  
The high priestess Caillean asks her to marry a powerful Roman general placed in Britania. Caillean agrees and leaves Avalon only to be miserable that’s she not there. Above that she become bitter at Avalon for sending her away.
Frankly I can’t pull much sympathy in this situation. Take responsibility for your choice in the matter, lady. I’m sure it sucks to be booted from a magical temple, but if you really don’t want to, don’t go.

For all her whining about leaving Avalon, Teleri is a really lame priestess. Aside from communicating with the temple every once in a while she does nothing magical. She neither performs rituals nor appreciates nature like the Druids would have.  Disappointing

As for the high priestess Caillean, she becomes older and places more of the world’s concerns on her shoulders.

From her earlier work, I know Marian Zimmer Bradley is not afraid to kill important characters.
Everyone seems pretty doomed.
Bail. 
Lady of Avalon on Amazon 
The Mists of Avalon on Amazon (This is the good one!!)
 
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Now bookworms all over can participate in the global Olympic Readathon sponsored by Random House of Canada. 

Between Friday July 27th and Sunday August 12 readers will challenge themselves to a set reading goal.

To join the fun, click here. Add your name, twitter account, and blog to the bottom of the list. 

  “@RandomHouseCA will be using the hashtag #OlympicReadathon to chat about our progress on Twitter, so be sure to join in the conversation and encourage your friends and family to join our challenge.”

 

Wren is shooting for 1,000 pages.

Please leave a comment to keep in touch if you’d like to participate!

You may also like On Making Goals for Writing and Life. Click here for Article I: Fire Up!

 

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Dance Upon the Air,   Face the Fire,   Heaven and Earth

A trilogy by Nora Roberts follows a trio of magical ladies as they embrace their gifts and learn to love on a fictional island off Cape Cod. This cozy spot in Massachussets has all the trappings of Martha’s Vineyard–  the beach, the history, the small town feel–but the magic is unique. Long ago to escape the Salem Witch trials three women came together to create a place that they could call home.

However a curse exists on the island. To break it, three modern-day women with the island’s magic must be careful not to make the same mistakes as their ancestors. Whether it’s falling hard for a dangerous man, fighting love away as a defense, or trying to control love by giving it all up, each woman must face her challenge.

Description for Book 1: Dance Upon the Air
When Nell Channing arrives on charming Three Sisters Island, she believes that she’s finally found refuge from her abusive husband—and from the terrifying life she fled so desperately eight months ago… But even in this quiet, peaceful place, Nell never feels entirely at ease. ?
 
Careful to conceal her true identity, she takes a job as a cook at the local bookstore café—and begins to explore her feelings for the island sheriff, Zack Todd. But there is a part of herself she can never reveal to him—for she must continue to guard her secrets if she wants to keep the past at bay. One careless word, one misplaced confidence, and the new life she’s created so carefully could shatter completely. 

Just as Nell starts to wonder if she’ll ever be able to break free of her fear, she realizes that the island suffers under a terrible curse—one that can only be broken by the descendants of the Three Sisters, the witches who settled the island back in 1692. And now, with the help of two other strong, gifted women—and with the nightmares of the past haunting her every step—she must find the power to save her home, her love…and herself…

 

Review:

This series spoke to me because I love to summer in Cape Cod. Unlike a lot of the Cape themed novels out today, this has a paranormal witchy aspect to it. I think this series is very unique in that way, and so it may interest readers who love witches, spells, magic, or paranormal thrillers.

Primarily the stories are romance. Taking place in a small town, you are introduced to most characters from the start. The main characters are sweetie-pie chef Nell, aggressive policewoman Ripley, and fiesty bookstore owner Mia.

Three women are imbued with special powers on the island, but that doesn’t mean they are ready to use them against brewing dark forces. Neither are they prepared to fall in love, but they best get ready as both magic and love stalks into their lives.

The first two books were my favorite even though I adore Mia as a character. Mia spotlights in the third book but by then the fantasy aspect of the series neared conclusion. As a device in the first two books the curse was great, but the lead up to the climax was the achilles heel of the trilogy.

Renowned romance author Nora Romance does a great job with the relationships, love, sex, friendship and warm fuzzies. I was pleasantly surprised by her depiction of witches and found it to be a nice balance between fantasy and realism. She writes some great rhyming spells and her scenes of witchcraft are well written. Magic has impressive effects but doesn’t seem too powerful.

For a beach or comfort read, dig into the books. Just don’t expect a masterful wrap-up to the island curse plot. I found myself skimming the parts about the curse in the midst of book three, just waiting to see how the romance would end.

This book supports the message that all ladies can be powerful goddesses. And that I will always be willing to read.

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Robert, diagnosed with cancer, decides to cryogenically freeze himself. His wife doesn’t agree but then, she’s a bitch. With the hopes of coming back from a deep slumber to see his grandchildren, Robert entrusts his body to scientists for an undeterminable future.
Boy, is he surprised when instead of sleeping he exists as a spirit. Able to travel the world in a second and follow his family, he can no longer touch his wife, enjoy food and drink, or assist with the corporation he spent his lifetime building. What will he do with himself now?

 
Review:

I highly enjoyed the first book written by M R Cornelius, H10N1, a post-apocalyptic thriller during an American pandemic. In her second novel, Cornelius continues to force her strong characters into interesting straights created by new technology.
The Ups and Downs of Being Dead is a page turner.
 
The main character Robert is a middle aged man. Even though I am a young woman, I still connected strongly to his character. Robert encounters other “temps” from the Cryogenic Center and ghosts as well—all of whom add to the story as informants, travel buddies, and post-life companions.
Travel lovers will be amused by Robert’s exploits in New York City and worldwide. It’s not always an easy ride, but Robert does come to see the “Ups” of being dead as well. 
Although a bit larger than life, Roberts family is realistic: the hard working corporate baron and show wife who raise an independent businesswoman and an overindulged schmuck of a son. What they do after Robert’s death, however, is completely unpredictable to all.

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MR Cornelius Site 

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Fantasy: "Caught" by Wren Doloro

Once upon a time, I (Wren Doloro) took a writing course and came up with a great idea. Buoyed by the enthusiasm of my classmate’s reaction to her favorite piece, I wrote a novel soon after.

I’m still editing the novel, but since it’s so fun to share..here is the piece that inspired all the rest. 

 

Oliver

Oliver gasped a final breath as the azure sky flew out of grasp. His heart sank as the tide swung over his face. Body somersaulting, he turned flips he could never have managed were he in control. Water rushed his nose. The ocean swallowed his tears.

He struggled closer to the surface, still holding his breath. Calmness surrounded him before a decisive wave slammed him down. Its swirling power ripped the surfboard off his ankle.

 Oliver’s mouth opened in a cry of pain, and sea water choked him. His helpless body scraped along the rocky bottom. 
 
There was only one creature who could hear the sickening snap of his broken leg over the ocean’s roar.

The salt invaded Oliver’s nose and mouth. His eyes burned, body ached, and his struggle to paddle degraded into frenzied flailing. He knew even as he strained that his time would soon be up.  
 
Dark took him as arms wrapped around his body. Awake, he would have felt bare skin against his back, the scrape of jewelry and shells as she pinned him under one arm and plucked him from the ocean. 

The waters calmed and a ray of sunshine filtered through the churning blue above. It glinted off her pointy teeth as she drew him into her lair beneath the sea. Her tail left a stream of bubbles in her wake. 

 

 When Oliver came to, he heard a fire crackling and a woman singing. Her voice melted over him and sunk into his skin. Trembling and weak, his muscles refused to move. 

Oliver’s eyelashes fluttered. His heavy lids anchored his eyes closed. He imagined a woman as beautiful as her voice, with teal eyes, milky skin and gently curling red hair. She leaned over him, spilling her locks along his collarbone. Her croon grew louder. A soft caress lingered over his ribs, and she gripped him. 
A bead of sweat slid from his forehead to the solid rock beneath him.  The scrapes and wounds along Oliver’s body pounded in time to his heart. The break in his left leg seared while his foot tingled numb.

Finally, he gathered the energy to crack his eyes. The songstress’ gaze was ocean blue and released something inside of him. The pain faded under her sight. He fell under her spell. 

 

Oliver gasped as he escaped his body to meet her lips, drawn into her song. His fibers twisted into her notes of triumph, love, and conquest.He did not know this woman, but already he would have given her anything. 

And then he saw the blood.

Oliver lay transfixed as her smile revealed two rows of shark’s teeth. They opened wide. 

Mwahaha thanks for reading my short story! Please stay turned for more about my work in progress, as of now entitled Line of Isis. 

Any comments or retweets are appreciated. 
 
Please note that Oliver will not be making an appearance in said novel….
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The following is the first in a series by Wren Doloro entitled On Making Goals for Writing and Life. A later post in this series is: 7 ways to Write Everyday

How do you make Alphabet Soup into Success?
I’m not the most linear person. In the past I’ve described my thought process as ‘GLBK’ rather than ‘ABCD.’ I jump from idea to idea, and enjoy finding connections between them. Eventually,I miraculously discover the final product. Before I make great things, I have no idea what they look like.
In writing, some people call this a “pantser” style. Over time I’ve become a little more of a “plotter” by creating rough rough rough outlines. My favorite tool is a stack of note cards I can jot scene ideas on and move around at will.
God forbid I try to do anything with Roman numerals and parallel sentence structure. “No!” is what my muse says to me.

Despite all this, I am rather organized. Every major thing in my life I’ve wanted to get done, I got done. And reasonably fast, too. For what I lack in a linear process, I gain in enthusiasm and passion. This drive gets me to ‘Z.’

To travel you need destinations before deciding a route

 Something very important to me in my process is to write the goals down. Let me say this again: Write the goals down.

To write goals down, fuzzy ideas have to become concrete. Once the goals are concrete, todo lists and plans can fall into line. How can anyone hit the bullseye without the bullseye?

For example, say fictional Fred has a fuzzy goal to go to Ireland. His friend Norman convinces him to go to Northern Ireland to save money.
Fred doesn’t actually know what destinations he wants to see in Ireland. He figures, it being the same island and all, Northern Ireland will be kindof the same. (Don’t ever say this to anyone Irish or Northern Irish) 

Fast Forward. They both go to Northern Ireland and go to Belfast. Turns out Norman mostly wants to hang out in bars and talk to locals. Fred thinks thats ok, but he loves experiencing history like he did on their bus tour.

Fred wants to check out churches, prisons and murals. Then he’d like to go on to places outside of Belfast. Norman agrees to some things nearby, but mostly Fred’s plans sound expensive.

The trip ends up being a compromise between their two goals. Norman spends more money and Fred doesn’t get to go to any southern places.

If you don’t have a clear idea of what you want to do on a trip with another person, this happens all the time. I know, I’m a travel brat.

Guess what? Real life is full of other people! If they have a clearer goal than you, they’re more likely to get it.

Incorporating your Passion into your goals gives you super powers!

 Ok so you say you know everything you want to do. Do you have it on your wall so you see it when you wake up? By where you brush your teeth? In your kitchen? Even in a notebook you use for your project? On your corkboard? No? No motivational collage? No related background for your computer or cellphone? None of the above? Really?

Well then sure, you know, but then you might

  •   go a bunch of days without thinking about it

OR worse

  •  stress yourself out because you have to constantly remind yourself of your goals to get them done.

OR even worse

  • You don’t actually care about your goals. They have not been articulated well enough for you to stay excited.

You should want your top goals. You should crave them. A burning urge to cover ground on your goals fills you every time you see that motivational picture, or that goal written out.

Write goals in the present. Examples are:

  • I am driving a teal convertible to my mansion on a hill.
  • I am calling a crowd of 500 people to save the whales
  • I am finished my first draft by September 2012.
When in doubt, read!
Write down general goals first to see how your life fits together. These are your Passions that you put in a visible place. Whether it is in picture form, or on words, they’ll keep you on task.
If you don’t have goals fear not. They are there, you just can’t put them into words yet.
 
The Passion Test is a great tool to do this. Great book, but in a nut shell you make a list of phrases that begin, “When I’m living life ideally, I am…” Then you order them by importance. Focus on the top five and assess twice year. 
Another great book to check out if you need help digging deeper is The Artist Way by Julia Cameron. She presents weekly exercises to discover those secret dreams you conveniently forgot about.
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Seriously, if you see a reminder everyday, you will stay motivated and at least give goals regular thought. And thought leads to action.
If you can do something small daily, it quickly adds up. By writing three pages a day for three months, I finished the draft of my novel Line of Isis. Note at the time I had three jobs and went to school part time!
Never underestimate the importance of motivation. I worked my a** off as I wrote my draft, but I had the energy because I knew I was on the way to my goals.
Dream big!
Please feel free to comment on what works for you– how do you articulate your goals and get fired up about them?
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If you enjoyed this post in the series On Making Goals for Writing and Life, you may also enjoy the post “7 Ways to Write Everyday.”

 

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Poetry: Margaret Atwood Freebie on Wattpad!

So Margaret Atwood, Canadian poet and Queen of Speculative Fiction, is taking Wattpad by storm.  She now offers four free poems in a short ebook called “Thriller Suite.”

What is Wattpad? It’s a site with a mobile app where you can find free books that other readers have voted up to recommend. In minutes you can fill your phone up with a stack of books to read, follow authors as fans and comment on stories.

The site Wattpad is made for readers to give feedback to new authors and give their work a try. This is a great tool for authors to get their works out to the public, build excitement and get great reviews. Some books have been downloaded by millions!

In addition, Margaret Atwood is also assisting the fundraising for Fanado.

“Fanado: (n) fan.ad.o /fe’nado/:a person who is totally into and wildly knowledgeable about great artists of any and all kinds.

Fanado is a new way for fans to connect with writers, artists, musicians, and other celebrities online.”

She wrote an eight week comic about these new technologies for readers. Anyone can subscribe to the eight week comic by donating one dollar to Fanado.

Check me out on Wattpad, I have a story I am sure you will love if you enjoy Margaret Atwood
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With stars in her eyes, Alice Clarke boards the Titanic, heading to a new life. On board, she falls in love, only to lose him in the disaster. He leaves her with a pocketwatch, which holds more secrets than she realizes.??
 
Her great-grandson, Michael Kearney, inherits her diary. When he overhears an unusual story about why the ship was wrecked, he finally reads it and finds himself in the middle of a conspiracy that stretches across a century involving some very powerful people. ??
 
With the help of Soft Kitty, an irascible conspiracy theorist, and his girlfriend, Sylvia, he must bring the truth to light and bring down the men behind it, no matter what the cost. Maybe some secrets are better left at the bottom of the sea.
 
Review:

If Titanic stories fascinate you, this is a unique book to check out.
 
Mystery, Titanic memoirs, corporate conspiracy, contemporary political commentary–what an interesting combination of elements. This book surmises that everything we’ve assumed about the Titanic is wrong. 
 
I can certainly say this book kept me guessing. The story alternates from Alice Clarke on board and after, her grandson Michael in the present, various people involved with the Titanic, and a few scenes by other characters.
 
Balancing a large number of perspectives is a tricky thing to do. My only problem with this was that the last third of the book mostly lay in the present with Michael. Which would be cool, but the book seemed to shift genres almost completely to something like film noir.
 
The issue is I didn’t find the action scenes to be seat-gripping or page turning. But the story of the ship, and Michael’s character did pull me through.
 
The historical novel parts are fascinating, although I needed a note from the author explaining any truth in their spin on Titanic history. Alice is a smart cookie.
 
Great main character–I rooted for soft spoken Michael. He still has a lot of depth as a shy guy. I think he displays much more personality than his ladyfriend Sylvia.
 
Soft Kitty is a ridiculous name. But I gotta give props for a sense of humor! 

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