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Fantasy: "Caught" by Wren Doloro

Once upon a time, I (Wren Doloro) took a writing course and came up with a great idea. Buoyed by the enthusiasm of my classmate’s reaction to her favorite piece, I wrote a novel soon after.

I’m still editing the novel, but since it’s so fun to share..here is the piece that inspired all the rest. 

 

Oliver

Oliver gasped a final breath as the azure sky flew out of grasp. His heart sank as the tide swung over his face. Body somersaulting, he turned flips he could never have managed were he in control. Water rushed his nose. The ocean swallowed his tears.

He struggled closer to the surface, still holding his breath. Calmness surrounded him before a decisive wave slammed him down. Its swirling power ripped the surfboard off his ankle.

 Oliver’s mouth opened in a cry of pain, and sea water choked him. His helpless body scraped along the rocky bottom. 
 
There was only one creature who could hear the sickening snap of his broken leg over the ocean’s roar.

The salt invaded Oliver’s nose and mouth. His eyes burned, body ached, and his struggle to paddle degraded into frenzied flailing. He knew even as he strained that his time would soon be up.  
 
Dark took him as arms wrapped around his body. Awake, he would have felt bare skin against his back, the scrape of jewelry and shells as she pinned him under one arm and plucked him from the ocean. 

The waters calmed and a ray of sunshine filtered through the churning blue above. It glinted off her pointy teeth as she drew him into her lair beneath the sea. Her tail left a stream of bubbles in her wake. 

 

 When Oliver came to, he heard a fire crackling and a woman singing. Her voice melted over him and sunk into his skin. Trembling and weak, his muscles refused to move. 

Oliver’s eyelashes fluttered. His heavy lids anchored his eyes closed. He imagined a woman as beautiful as her voice, with teal eyes, milky skin and gently curling red hair. She leaned over him, spilling her locks along his collarbone. Her croon grew louder. A soft caress lingered over his ribs, and she gripped him. 
A bead of sweat slid from his forehead to the solid rock beneath him.  The scrapes and wounds along Oliver’s body pounded in time to his heart. The break in his left leg seared while his foot tingled numb.

Finally, he gathered the energy to crack his eyes. The songstress’ gaze was ocean blue and released something inside of him. The pain faded under her sight. He fell under her spell. 

 

Oliver gasped as he escaped his body to meet her lips, drawn into her song. His fibers twisted into her notes of triumph, love, and conquest.He did not know this woman, but already he would have given her anything. 

And then he saw the blood.

Oliver lay transfixed as her smile revealed two rows of shark’s teeth. They opened wide. 

Mwahaha thanks for reading my short story! Please stay turned for more about my work in progress, as of now entitled Line of Isis. 

Any comments or retweets are appreciated. 
 
Please note that Oliver will not be making an appearance in said novel….
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The following is the first in a series by Wren Doloro entitled On Making Goals for Writing and Life. A later post in this series is: 7 ways to Write Everyday

How do you make Alphabet Soup into Success?
I’m not the most linear person. In the past I’ve described my thought process as ‘GLBK’ rather than ‘ABCD.’ I jump from idea to idea, and enjoy finding connections between them. Eventually,I miraculously discover the final product. Before I make great things, I have no idea what they look like.
In writing, some people call this a “pantser” style. Over time I’ve become a little more of a “plotter” by creating rough rough rough outlines. My favorite tool is a stack of note cards I can jot scene ideas on and move around at will.
God forbid I try to do anything with Roman numerals and parallel sentence structure. “No!” is what my muse says to me.

Despite all this, I am rather organized. Every major thing in my life I’ve wanted to get done, I got done. And reasonably fast, too. For what I lack in a linear process, I gain in enthusiasm and passion. This drive gets me to ‘Z.’

To travel you need destinations before deciding a route

 Something very important to me in my process is to write the goals down. Let me say this again: Write the goals down.

To write goals down, fuzzy ideas have to become concrete. Once the goals are concrete, todo lists and plans can fall into line. How can anyone hit the bullseye without the bullseye?

For example, say fictional Fred has a fuzzy goal to go to Ireland. His friend Norman convinces him to go to Northern Ireland to save money.
Fred doesn’t actually know what destinations he wants to see in Ireland. He figures, it being the same island and all, Northern Ireland will be kindof the same. (Don’t ever say this to anyone Irish or Northern Irish) 

Fast Forward. They both go to Northern Ireland and go to Belfast. Turns out Norman mostly wants to hang out in bars and talk to locals. Fred thinks thats ok, but he loves experiencing history like he did on their bus tour.

Fred wants to check out churches, prisons and murals. Then he’d like to go on to places outside of Belfast. Norman agrees to some things nearby, but mostly Fred’s plans sound expensive.

The trip ends up being a compromise between their two goals. Norman spends more money and Fred doesn’t get to go to any southern places.

If you don’t have a clear idea of what you want to do on a trip with another person, this happens all the time. I know, I’m a travel brat.

Guess what? Real life is full of other people! If they have a clearer goal than you, they’re more likely to get it.

Incorporating your Passion into your goals gives you super powers!

 Ok so you say you know everything you want to do. Do you have it on your wall so you see it when you wake up? By where you brush your teeth? In your kitchen? Even in a notebook you use for your project? On your corkboard? No? No motivational collage? No related background for your computer or cellphone? None of the above? Really?

Well then sure, you know, but then you might

  •   go a bunch of days without thinking about it

OR worse

  •  stress yourself out because you have to constantly remind yourself of your goals to get them done.

OR even worse

  • You don’t actually care about your goals. They have not been articulated well enough for you to stay excited.

You should want your top goals. You should crave them. A burning urge to cover ground on your goals fills you every time you see that motivational picture, or that goal written out.

Write goals in the present. Examples are:

  • I am driving a teal convertible to my mansion on a hill.
  • I am calling a crowd of 500 people to save the whales
  • I am finished my first draft by September 2012.
When in doubt, read!
Write down general goals first to see how your life fits together. These are your Passions that you put in a visible place. Whether it is in picture form, or on words, they’ll keep you on task.
If you don’t have goals fear not. They are there, you just can’t put them into words yet.
 
The Passion Test is a great tool to do this. Great book, but in a nut shell you make a list of phrases that begin, “When I’m living life ideally, I am…” Then you order them by importance. Focus on the top five and assess twice year. 
Another great book to check out if you need help digging deeper is The Artist Way by Julia Cameron. She presents weekly exercises to discover those secret dreams you conveniently forgot about.
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Seriously, if you see a reminder everyday, you will stay motivated and at least give goals regular thought. And thought leads to action.
If you can do something small daily, it quickly adds up. By writing three pages a day for three months, I finished the draft of my novel Line of Isis. Note at the time I had three jobs and went to school part time!
Never underestimate the importance of motivation. I worked my a** off as I wrote my draft, but I had the energy because I knew I was on the way to my goals.
Dream big!
Please feel free to comment on what works for you– how do you articulate your goals and get fired up about them?
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If you enjoyed this post in the series On Making Goals for Writing and Life, you may also enjoy the post “7 Ways to Write Everyday.”

 

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Poetry: Margaret Atwood Freebie on Wattpad!

So Margaret Atwood, Canadian poet and Queen of Speculative Fiction, is taking Wattpad by storm.  She now offers four free poems in a short ebook called “Thriller Suite.”

What is Wattpad? It’s a site with a mobile app where you can find free books that other readers have voted up to recommend. In minutes you can fill your phone up with a stack of books to read, follow authors as fans and comment on stories.

The site Wattpad is made for readers to give feedback to new authors and give their work a try. This is a great tool for authors to get their works out to the public, build excitement and get great reviews. Some books have been downloaded by millions!

In addition, Margaret Atwood is also assisting the fundraising for Fanado.

“Fanado: (n) fan.ad.o /fe’nado/:a person who is totally into and wildly knowledgeable about great artists of any and all kinds.

Fanado is a new way for fans to connect with writers, artists, musicians, and other celebrities online.”

She wrote an eight week comic about these new technologies for readers. Anyone can subscribe to the eight week comic by donating one dollar to Fanado.

Check me out on Wattpad, I have a story I am sure you will love if you enjoy Margaret Atwood
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Description:
 
With stars in her eyes, Alice Clarke boards the Titanic, heading to a new life. On board, she falls in love, only to lose him in the disaster. He leaves her with a pocketwatch, which holds more secrets than she realizes.??
 
Her great-grandson, Michael Kearney, inherits her diary. When he overhears an unusual story about why the ship was wrecked, he finally reads it and finds himself in the middle of a conspiracy that stretches across a century involving some very powerful people. ??
 
With the help of Soft Kitty, an irascible conspiracy theorist, and his girlfriend, Sylvia, he must bring the truth to light and bring down the men behind it, no matter what the cost. Maybe some secrets are better left at the bottom of the sea.
 
Review:

If Titanic stories fascinate you, this is a unique book to check out.
 
Mystery, Titanic memoirs, corporate conspiracy, contemporary political commentary–what an interesting combination of elements. This book surmises that everything we’ve assumed about the Titanic is wrong. 
 
I can certainly say this book kept me guessing. The story alternates from Alice Clarke on board and after, her grandson Michael in the present, various people involved with the Titanic, and a few scenes by other characters.
 
Balancing a large number of perspectives is a tricky thing to do. My only problem with this was that the last third of the book mostly lay in the present with Michael. Which would be cool, but the book seemed to shift genres almost completely to something like film noir.
 
The issue is I didn’t find the action scenes to be seat-gripping or page turning. But the story of the ship, and Michael’s character did pull me through.
 
The historical novel parts are fascinating, although I needed a note from the author explaining any truth in their spin on Titanic history. Alice is a smart cookie.
 
Great main character–I rooted for soft spoken Michael. He still has a lot of depth as a shy guy. I think he displays much more personality than his ladyfriend Sylvia.
 
Soft Kitty is a ridiculous name. But I gotta give props for a sense of humor! 

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Thriller: Secrets by S.L. Pierce — 4.5 Stars

Description:

Secrets…we all have them.

Gwen Michaels is a former assassin, emphasis on former. She walked away two years ago and had no plans to share her secret, least of all with her husband Jack. But when she is attacked in her own home by an unknown assailant, she is thrust back into her old element.
 
More shocking to Gwen than the man hired to kill her, is that he knows nothing of her past. Now Gwen and Jack are on the run until Gwen can discover who wants her dead, and why!
 
Secrets is a fun thriller delving into the world of developing super computer chips and industrial espionage!
 
 
Review:
 
Wow! Talk about bad ass chicks! From the moment I flipped open this book, I became hooked. Gwen is a no-nonsense expert. She knows exactly what to do in a deadly situation. Find a killer in your house? Take him out and get some answers! How do you avoid a trace? Be prepared with fake ids, and cash. How do you tell your husband? Well, that one might not be so easy….
 
No filler in this book, and the short chapters make it easy to gobble up one bite at a time. Although the story is mostly told from Gwen’s perspective, every once in a while another character reveals his or her backstory. The balance between these is nice because it doesn’t stray far from Mrs. Kickass, aka Gwen Michaels, former assassin. 
 
Although computer chips come to play a big role, you don’t need to know anything about them to enjoy this book. After reading, you’ll never underestimate a woman again!
 
Secrets on Amazon
Secrets on Smashwords
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Description:
Fifteen years ago, one fateful day bound the lives of two perfect strangers…
 
Melita Saari-Quinn is living the consequences of a traumatizing psychic event that turned her adolescence upside down. Now, disillusioned with her job as a psychotherapist and desiring a change from her lackluster existence, she hopes that something out of her  ordinary sphere of existence – something totally uninhibited and spontaneous – will renew her zest for life.
Alex Moncado seems to have it all – good looks, a successful business, and a fun life in “party central” of the Mediterranean: the island of Malta. Except for one day in the year when he can’t help but remember a tragedy that never should have been. One day he’d rather forget, because if he doesn’t, the guilt will consume him.
Can one passionate night together banish the ghosts of the past and give two lost souls a second chance? 
 
Only Fate can tell…
Review:
This tasty bite of paranormal romance packs an erotic punch. Melita finds herself looking for something casual to spice things up and take her mind away from a terrible event witnessed 15 years ago. Luckily there is a dating service on her island of Malta with a stellar reputation…almost good enough to be magical. 
Natalie G. Owens creates major frisson between the main characters. The plot provokes real emotions. I have a serious soft spot for blind heroines. Add to that mix some delightful shivers. This book does not fade to black! Hooray! Great metaphors, imagery and descriptions. Loving and sexy. 

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If you love reading about smart chicks kicking ass as much as I do, then you need to check out this anthology. Sporting both heros and heroines, this collection of short stories ranges from the typical James Bond style crime or secret service action to paranormal romance or urban fantasy. While picking this book up I had no idea I’d be in for such a diverse and fast paced ride. Did I mention its less than a dollar?! Fantastic travel book.

The majority of the stories left me wanting more–more about the characters and more from the authors. Luckily if that is the case, a lot of these stories are spin off scenes from full length books. Stories that especially stood out for me are:

The opening story by Carolyn McCray, “An Engagement to Remember,” reminds me greatly of James Bond: fancy restaurant, satin dress and champagne turns into mayhem. Computer wizard Rebecca is a great female lead while Brandt takes the firearms. Both feature in Carolyn McCray‘s other works, 30 Pieces of Silver and Havoc

“Uh Oh, It’s Magic” by Amber Scott dives into action headlong. Callie has just received a blow to the head. She better figure out what to do fast! As the title hints, this one is urban fantasy. Amber Scott also writes paranormal romance.

Carolyn Mccray reapears in “With Star Diamonds in Her Eyes” as coauthor with Ben Hopkin. This  interesting Paris adventure is science fiction mixed with crime. Ben Hopkin and Carolyn Mccray also author MoonRush: An Action-Packed Near-Future Adventure.

“What a Tiny World” by Jeremy Rodden is a seriously freaky theme park investigation. He is author of the Toonopolis series.

One of my ultimate favorites of this anthology is the short and funny, “It Keeps Getting Shitakier,” by Patricia Mason, author of In Deep Shitake (A Humorous Romantic Suspense)

“Partners” by Mimi Barbour kindof disappointed me because you get a chunk of story without a real climax. Because it is split into chapters it seems longer than the other stories, while being less satisfying. To me this story was the Achille’s heel of the anthology.

The anthology takes a strong finish with “Dark Lullaby” by Cristyn West. The supersnarky profiler Kent works alongside the more diplomatic detective Nicole to solve a case. Serial Killers are what the author Cristyn does best.

Received copy free as Amazon promotion
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 In Donora, Pennsylvania the mills are churning ugly smoke in the fall of 1948. Community nurse Rose Pavlesic is a tough cookie– wrangling her patients, family and life into shape with sheer will. Suddenly the time comes when everything is called into question. Her community nurse program lacks funding, her children’s lives are spiraling out of her control, and her husband…she can’t even think about everything wrong with their relationship as she juggles the well-being of the entire town. Her one hope for funding circles around the Superintendent’s family. The secrets of her past come to haunt her and blacken her vision like the fog coating the town.

Rose is an amazing character. Any modern woman would admire the way she uses every moment in the day. From making breakfast, picking up the chores her family neglects to do, watching her nephew, visiting four families before lunch, saving money bill by bill, straight to coming home to dust a second time, and putting dinner on the table. How does she do it? Why by being really friggin stressed and a bit bitter than no one else ever gives her a hand.

Things come to a head quickly in this book as everything starts to crumble on Rose. She’s tough, but there are things that can make anyone curl up into a little ball. After the Fog has great pacing, bit by bit the characters reveal shameful acts and sordid pasts.  Kathleen Shoop sure packs a lot of action into a week’s time. A few typographical errors, an unexplained shift in perspective and a couple of spots I couldn’t help but skim are what kept this book from rating higher. Overall I couldn’t stop reading, and found some serious tears in my eyes. Read this book!

After the Fog on Amazon
Kathleen Shoop’s Website 

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a Rafflecopter giveawayCheck out the following excerpt and enter the book giveaway!! Shadow Sight, the first novel in the Ivy Granger urban fantasy series, goes on sale in trade paperback and ebook editions July 24, 2012. Read on for the review by Wren Doloro.

     I sniffed the air and smelled a whiff of sulfur.  Oh, Mab’s bloody bones!  My hand snagged a crucifix off the desk and I started muttering the Lord’s Prayer.  I may not follow any particular faith, but Kaye had taught me a trick or two.  Ten to one odds my client wasn’t bothered by today’s intense heat.
     Color me pixed—the guy sitting on the other side of my desk was a demon.  My hand, the one holding the crucifix in a white-knuckled grip, was starting to shake.
     “You seem to have some inkling as to my lineage, however I am not here for myself,” he said.  “Hell has no interest in you…yet.  I represent a client, someone very powerful who requires your special services.”
     “You’re telling me that you’re some other dude’s lackey?” I asked.  My hand steadied as I held the crucifix out before me.
     “Attorney,” he said, shooting me a narrow eyed glare.
     “Lower than a lackey then,” I said.
     I was playing with fire, or brimstone.  I should order the demon to leave, but there was something intriguing about his story.  I couldn’t help becoming curious.  Someone had made a deal with a devil, literally, to gain my services.  I wasn’t sure if I should be flattered or die of fright.
     At least I knew my instincts were good—this was definitely going to be a long day and this really was a client from Hell.


 

Review
Ivy Granger isn’t a character from Harry Potter, she is a specially skilled detective in a town brimming with unusual creatures. Others may see an old man collecting bottles or a rasta smoking a joint, but she sees the monsters hidden behind the glamor. More importantly, Ivy has the gift of psychometry, the ability to sense visions from touching an object. As soon as her skin touches people or objects, she may be victim to seeing horrible happenings from the past. These talents are what gives an edge to Private Eye, the private detective agency run by Ivy and her *rockabilly friend Jinx. 
In Shadow Sight, the first book of the series,  Ivy Granger comes face to face with a demon. Worse a demon lawyer. He wrangles her into an early morning meeting the next day (a Saturday rrrr), and drops the bomb that Ivy better start looking for clues or the entire town will be under attack from beasties. 
Ivy’s best friend Jinx has rockabilly style (like above)

The number of creatures introduced throughout the book is staggering. Because each creature tends to have a way to hide it’s appearance, these fae and demons lurk in plain sight. I found the way this is done to be very clever. Props to the author for including species I have never heard of before. However, I could have used a pronunciation guide for the dark horses each uisge. 

*UPDATE: The author E.J. has informed me that an index with pronunciation guide will soon be in the books!*

I like the main character Ivy, she seems to have her head on her shoulders. Why she would be wearing three inch heels in the cover is beyond me, as those aren’t included in the two pairs of shoes she owns in the book. Cross trainers and a pair of Doc Martens–so no, not really a heels chick. Practical, she wears gloves in the heat to avoid nasty visions.  Since often being sarcastic and grumpy seems to be part of Ivy’s personality, she could have been a little more edgy.
Shadow Sight is a quick read. I found myself zipping blithely along in the grocery aisle. Overall it was a good story with excellent images, mythos, action, and pacing. The romance subplot could have been integrated a little better throughout the book so it was less out of the blue. I wished Ivy’s character was a little meatier, but there’s nobody else quite like her. Her gifts make Ivy Granger and her detective agency truly unique. 
Wren received a free copy in exchange for review

E.J. Stevens writes on her Unusual Creatures in this guestpost:

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Katherine Howe blew me away with her first book, The Physick Book of Deliverance Dane. It hit number two on the New York Time’s Bestsellers. Her first book weaves together modern story, scholarly research and fictional eighteenth-century documents. Impressed by the research, beautiful prose and themes of her first novel, I set into The House of Velvet and Glass as soon as I could. 
 
The House of Velvet and Glass follows the Boston-based Allston family as they grapple with their fates. Pieces of their lives are interwoven, jumping from 1885 to 1917 and in between, member to member. Sybil Allston, the eldest daughter now “too old to marry” is the key player in the book. She grieves for lives lost by exploring seances, the use of the crystal ball, and opium. 
 
The front cover features a poppy, an extremely rich symbol. It is the line between living and dying, dreaming and waking. It brings peace to wounds but in excess it numbs us. The theme is explored in the environment of opium dens, and behind the doors of the well to do. The period of the book is at the edge of when the United States began to regulate opiates, previously a generous ingredient in many over the counter remedies. So full of technological advancement, the era also marks the great catastrophe of the Titanic and the beginning of World War I.
 
House of Velvet picks up on themes begun in The Physick Book. Once again academia and the scientific method conflicts with intuition, magic and the unexplainable. Fate and freedom war. Characters must decide how to live their lives with honor even with few options. How does one make a mark? Through family we find our darkness and ourselves. 
 
I recommend this highly to all who love historical, literary or paranormal fiction. The prose is to die for, each word carefully fitted to compose a rich vision. I can see the light streaming through the curtained windows and experience the invigoration of an opium dream.
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