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Thriller: JET by Russell Blake – 4.5 Stars

 

Description:


Code name: Jet

Twenty-eight-year-old Jet was once the Mossad’s most lethal operative before faking her own death and burying that identity forever.

But the past doesn’t give up on its secrets easily.

When her new life on a tranquil island is shattered by a brutal attack, Jet must return to a clandestine existence of savagery and deception to save herself and those she loves. A gritty, unflinching roller-coaster of high-stakes twists and shocking turns, JET features a new breed of protagonist that breaks the mold.

Fans of Lizbeth Salander, SALT, and the Bourne trilogy will find themselves carried along at Lamborghini speed to a conclusion as jarring and surprising as the story’s heroine is unconventional.


 
Review:

Ah, yes another book by Russell Blake. If his name sounds familiar, that’s because he is constantly publishing new thrillers. His book The Voynich Cypher  rated a 5 Star rating from me. You may also remember JET from Blake’s guest post on his strong female characters.

1. JET kicks ass.

 

One minute JET is a business woman hanging out in her internet cafe. The next she is grabbed

But what they aren’t expecting is just how lethal she can be.


JET seriously can take care of herself. And when she does team up with a partner, he better be ready to let her lead the way out of this mess. 


She may have intended to put her career as an assassin behind her, but that doesn’t mean she doesn’t remember exactly how to do the job.


Many comparisons can be made between her and Liz Salanger from the Girl With the Dragon Tattoo, mostly because JET can fight and she’s kinda effed up from her childhood.


But JET also has a lot of heart, and one of her driving forces is lunch. 


2. I admit –some of the plot confused me.


A number of different actors come after JET. She has to keep her life a secret from the shady organization that trained her as an assassin. Then there is some Russian guy, and some American government guys, and a lackey..


I have to admit I got a little confused. Since Blake uses history as inspiration, I’m sure that the details were drawn from real life. I’m not that familiar with these actors, however.


Many of the chapters jump to different times or to a different character’s perspective. This is the first book and I am just introduced to everyone. I do love appendices for long character lists or secret organizations.


I did get the gist.


3. My favorite part is when JET works her way towards an enemy using her sexuality.


OK, now you may think “What’s so special about this, Wren? Aren’t women always using their sexy wiles to confuse stupid men in thrillers?”


True. But there is something quite special about this part of the book. JET gets glammed up in tight leather and spiky hair and heads to the casino. She’s a high roller with a crowd watching her as she stands aloof.


Her target is known for his BDSM sexual history, as well as his flexibility towards both roles. Rather than act like a coy bimbo, JET goes the other way and suggests that if he is found worthy he may earn the honor of submitting to her. 


And since they are headed to a private party on a boat, she’s sure they can find some rope.

I love strong ladies. This whole scene fills me with joy. Since the reader knows the trick about to be played, things are hilarious. 


And of course, since JET pretends she is a popular erotic romance author, that sure stirred up some envy for this writer.


Honestly even though I got a little confused with the plot, this scene made up for it completely.


4. International travel, I loove you.


In addition to Russia and Israel, the main action in the book takes place in the South American Continent. 


Being ultra prepared JET of course has the resources to travel anywhere in the world to escape attackers or to solve mysteries related to them.


I really enjoy books which include new places to add to my bucket list. As Russell Blake lives in Mexico, I am sure a lot of his personal experience is utilized in his descriptions.


Thanks for the tour of the word, Russell!

5. In sum:

Read this book. Just do it.


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Here! Here! This week MR Cornelius, speculative fiction author of The Ups and Downs of Being Dead, and (a personal favorite of mine) H10N1.

Here’s what Cornelius has to say about Villains and her writing:

I decided I wanted to be a writer when I was still fairly young.  Maybe it was all the stories I read about big, bad wolves, wicked witches, sly foxes, and ugly trolls. The farmer’s wife hacking off mouse tails with a carving knife? Yeah!
 
As I grew older, it became abundantly clear that no story is worth its salt without a villain. The tough part is creating an antagonist that’s unique, one-of-a-kind. But that is no small feat. Just like Christopher Booker pointed out in his book The Seven Basic Plots, it has probably been done before.
 
So how do I make a ‘bad guy’ good reading?
 
 
 I came across this great anecdote on John Sandford’s website, where he explains how he came up with the antagonist for his novel Eyes of Prey.
So you’re sitting around in the office, feet on the desk, throwing wadded-up pieces of paper at a waste-basket, and you’re thinking, all right, kills a woman, kills a woman. Let’s see, can’t cut her throat, did that in the first novel; she can’t be crippled, did that in the first novel. No violent rape, did that in the second one… cut her nose off?
 
No, not her nose. It’s gotta be tragic, but a nose, handled just a little wrong, could be seen as slightly comical. A finger? Well, finger amputation could be ugly, but it’s not really horrible, is it? Lots of people lose fingers and lead normal lives. And even good guys cut off people’s fingers — see Denzel Washington’s character in Man on Fire.
 
Ears? Too Van Gogh. Maybe even too artsy, somehow — didn’t one of the Getty kids get an ear cut off? Getty, as in art museum?
 
How about gouging out the eyes?
 
Okay, that’s bad. But why would he do it? What would be his motivation? (Throw some more paper balls in the waste basket.)
 
And how would he keep the eyes for trophies? In jars? That’s icky. They’d be floating around in there like pickled eggs in a redneck bar; so maybe not eyes. Maybe pull out fingernails? No, no, no. Leave that for the Gestapo novels.
 
Back to eyes.
 
How about… how about if he cut off their eyelids so they’d have to see themselves die, couldn’t close their eyes? Then he’d have the eyelids left over, maybe Davenport could find an eyelid under a couch…
 
Wait a minute! What if he used the eyelids as trophies? You know, strung them up somehow? Hung them from the ceiling, so they’d be floating around like little butterflies…
 
[Sound of frantic typing.]
 
Like Sandford says, with each new book, the challenge to come up with bigger, badder people gets tough. I’ve broadened my villain base considerably. Cruelty and malice aren’t limited to men. Remember Annie Wilkes swinging that sledge hammer in Stephen King’s Misery? Or Nurse Ratched in One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest, who showed absolutely no remorse after Billy committed suicide?
 
And of course, the threat may not even come from another human. How about the shark in Jaws? Cujo? King Kong? In some instances, the antagonist is a disease, a war, the weather, the sea. Sometimes there’s more than one villain in a story. I had a flu pandemic, various marauders and looters, and even a pack of dogs in my novel H10 N1.
So here is my solution. I have made the task of developing unique villains easier by creating a series of giant spinning wheels, like they use on the Wheel of Fortune. I have one for the villain, another for the weapon, and a third for cause of death. My next book is about an agoraphobic cabana boy who uses soap on a rope to cause asphyxiation.
(Oh, dear. I probably shouldn’t have told you the ending.)
 
 
BIO:
After 15 years as a cafeteria manager in an elementary school, M. R. Cornelius turned in her apron and non-skid shoes for a robe and slippers. She now writes full-time at home, in Atlanta, Georgia.
 
 
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Wren’s Journal- November No Shame New Moon

Hey everybody,

Twice a month I take a little time to share what’s going on with Wren. This particular new moon is something special. Here’s an explanation from Stella Seaspirit:

“We have a solar eclipse today and a lunar eclipse on the 28th. Solar eclipses are about new beginnings and activating your conscious intentions. Lunar eclipses are about completion and deconstructing subconscious motives.
New Moon in Scorpio coincides with the solar eclipse today. Close the cycles you no longer wish to experience in your life and open a new cycle for stepping up and moving forward.”

Stella also has a great ritual on Releasing Untoward Behavior. If you are at all interested in observing the new moon, a classic thing to do is to clear out feelings, beliefs, or behaviors that don’t serve you.

This is something I have been working with quite a bit. Lately I have been reading Daring Greatly by Brenee Brown. I never before released the extent to which shame has been prevalent in my life.

A video by Brenee Brown:

 Often times when we are putting shame on people we don’t see a problem with it. Like shaming a kid into cleaning up their mess, or not getting good enough grades. It is how we learned to do things ‘the right way’ and we don’t really understand how to speak in other terms.

Same goes for rules that we live our lives by. That’s why I think many of the people cling to stereotypes by policing people within their own group. Like men who tell their sons to “stop acting like a pussy” or “cut your hair, you look like a faggot.” That’s shaming.

But women do it, too. A major thing that affects women even though its really superficial is our appearance. I’ve really always been more of a comfortable clothing girl, but it was still hurtful if my stepmother called me sloppy, messy and said “If you eat like that, no boy is ever going to date you.”

Remember how when Hilary ran for president, people were talking about her cankles? Mean girls know how to hurt you by making fun of your style, or the way you wear your makeup.

All these things are stupid but they still hurt. Living your life in fear of feeling shame sucks. But it’s prevalent and many of the people putting it on you think it’s right. Shamers may even feel like they are doing you a favor.

And just as important to remember is that growing up with shame around us, it’s easy to automatically shame ourselves all the time.


For me–overcoming this is the biggest challenge. I sike myself out by telling myself if I do whatever I want, I’m going to be so freaky no one is going to want me around. I have to let go of that, or it will keep me from meeting a bunch of awesome weird people.

Once I finish Daring Greatly, I will be writing a full review. But I just wanted to share my personal thoughts on this, because looking into your darker feelings can be really helpful. We can grow once we can figure out –what am I afraid people will know about me? Why do I feel I don’t deserve what I want?

Whether it is love, money, friendship, understanding, acceptance, truth, or your dreams, I think everyone deserves to have what they really want. As long as it doesn’t hurt anyone, and really if you are “lit up” in life, you will be helping others and enriching the world. It’s not selfishness, it is embracing your gift to the world.

These past two weeks I have been battling shame and limitations in order to find my true purpose. To be ok with not making a ton of money right now while I plan and grow the business that will really make me happy. To let go of the shameful feelings that accompany quitting a job or making my boyfriend mad or coming up with a business idea that turns out not to pan out.

Making mistakes is part of life. Someone will always disapprove of what you do or the way you do it. Even if you pretend you are super boring and never take any risks. I guarantee it, because I’ve tried that, too. 

In order to do great things, risks are necessary. Don’t let yourself avoid the risks because of the possibility of shame. And if you’re having trouble of that, please feel free to contact me because I can so empathize!

Stay amazing,

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Y: THE LAST MAN, winner of three Eisner Awards and one of the most critically acclaimed, best-selling comic books series of the last decade, is that rare example of a page-turner that is at once humorous, socially relevant and endlessly surprising.

Written by Brian K. Vaughan (LOST, PRIDE OF BAGHDAD, EX MACHINA) and with art by Pia Guerra, this is the saga of Yorick Brown—the only human survivor of a planet-wide plague that instantly kills every mammal possessing a Y chromosome. Accompanied by a mysterious government agent, a brilliant young geneticist and his pet monkey, Ampersand, Yorick travels the world in search of his lost love and the answer to why he’s the last man on earth.

Review:
Sweet! Here’s a nice graphic novel about gender politics set in a dystopian setting. 

1. The question this series poses is interesting: what would happen if there was only one man left in the world?

What I like most about this series is that it really brings up all of the stereotypes about men and women. Whatever simple question a person can create to answer the premise of this series is probably going to be influenced by these stereotypes.
Will women all weep and despair powerless without men? Or, as in Y, will there be angry hordes of women roaming the United States on motorcycles hellbent on destroying any symbol left of the patriarchy? 
There are many different reactions that the women in Y have in response to the death of almost all the men in the world.

2. What kind of man would be “strong” enough to survive the death of all others of his gender?

The sole survivor Yurick isn’t an alpha male. He’s a escape artist hobbyist, who has spend much of his time lately practicing his art in his bedroom. He ties himself up with various contraptions and practices getting down.
This gives him something to do as he waits for the woman he loves to call him back. While he traps himself in his house, she is adventuring across Australia and enjoying her independence.

3. Do women all band together since they are so “relationship-focused”?

Like I said in number one, there are a variety of different reactions to the disappearance of men.
Some of these differences get very contentious. One big question is, who’s in charge?
Even with the most recent election, women representatives have always been the minority. Obviously the president is dead, and several others in line before it falls to a woman. But the power does.
But it turns out the the wives of many of the recently deceased male representatives feel entitled to their husbands positions…

4. Great start to a series

This edition is the intro to a longer series (which I have never read before) of ten volumes. A number of characters are introduced, and while I don’t understand what role all have to play, they are all unique enough to remember later.
I really enjoy the themes of this graphic novel and intend to keep reading in the future. Recommended!
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Guest Post: Massimo Marino, author of Tender Moments

 
 

Ecco Massimo Marino! For this week’s guest post on Villains, Massimo is telling us a story. I’m happy to introduce this fellow Italian to my blog :p (betcha didn’t know that about me!)

 

Love is Forever


Who doesn’t wish for the miracle of love to last forever? Wouldn’t you halt the flow of time, suspend that warm, love feeling so that it cannot fade, never betrayed by the weight of the years and their tiredness. Wouldn’t you gift everyone with that?
***
Another town, another quest. He felt he was in a mission, charged with the ultimate duty to maintain love unaltered. He gifted others, already. The road was difficult, but he had faith, and a strong will.
He knew that no road, for how long and impervious, can stop a one-step-at-a-time journey. Nothing could prevent him from accomplishing his duty, if he persevered.
He chose small towns in times of a country fair, or a festival. Times when people would be relaxed, and he could listen to their laughter and immerge in their emotions, flowing freely like a river, moving constantly as water flows over the rocks, sometimes soothing and sometimes exploding, spraying all around. Then, he was sure to find those who deserved the most, the best ones, the purest love and joy, and gift them.
***
The small town woke up to a warm and glorious day of mid-summer. Everyone contributed to the festival preparation, with their skills and craftsmanship. Those were moments to share, cherish, and remember. There is a reason those days are remembered as wholesome, as they are part of the traditions, foster a sense of unity; those aspects of a life that made everyone a whole—as a family and as a community. In small towns, many go off and bound to live adventures in large cities; but those who stay…they are the keepers. And among the keepers, deep rooted love can be found. 
He didn’t need a place to stay, he was a frugal man, and a driven man, too. He hid, unseen, watching from afar the whole town rejoice, and the excitement growing in expectation for the weekend’s festival. He felt all this was good, he could sense his duty would be fulfilled here, one more time. If only he had been gifted, too…before.
 


***
Everybody was out, and the weather was as if it had been planned for the event, skillfully. Everywhere was music, games, raffles, the farmers’ market, the $5 Kiss Booth with the High School Queen featured a long queue of boys who would have paid a million to be granted a second round.
He rejoiced for all those moments, and his eyes and ears guided him through the crowd.
“…I remember how fast your dad ran. Boy, that punt-return at the last game. I still have goose-bumps,” and other glimpses of happiness, while he wandered as a leaf surfing the current in the river of emotions. “…Grandpa helped build this field and then your uncle donated the land. It was memorable. Everybody helped.” 
How he felt blessed in days like these. Everyone smiled, and were gracious when they talked to him. Though he was a perfect stranger in town, no one ever mentioned it to him, or seemed to notice. He was welcomed, as a long gone son finally back home.
***
“Girls, over here!” A man shouted, with a thrill in his voice. A young woman, surely his wife, and a little girl, turned toward the voice, beaming, as an inner star was glowing through their eyes. Oh those smiles, radiant and full of untold promises, and kept ones, too.
He was examining handmade knitted fabrics, all while complimenting the old ladies proud for such an interest from someone so versed in the different yarns and knitting needles, “Oh, my wife loves knitting, and I love her so much. How could I not be knowledgeable of what gives her joy and pleasure?” he said, winking, and he provoked giggles and winks, too, from the old ladies, who reveled on memories of their own. He stopped short and excused himself, letting other patrons to grab the attention of the old knitters. He had felt it, more than heard it.
He was blessed. He had found the right ones again, and indulged in their unbelievable flow of love in everything they did, all day long. He talked to them, once, and caressed the golden hair of their little child. “I have a girl, too. Yours…is so much like her.”
***
The house was on the sparsely populated outskirts of the town. It’s windows were embellished with organza curtain fabric, and it had a lovely front yard, too. A small bicycle carefully leaned against the garage door. The little girl had put flowers in the front basket. She had to be such a joyful little child. Who wouldn’t wish for all this to last forever?
Sunday evening, families enjoyed time together, as they should. Dinner was served, and the bonds renewed, as they must.
He left the car at the far end of the road, at the corner with a side street. Anonymous and blended with the other cars, he had plates from every state. He would not risk impediments to his mission from such a minor thing like an off-the-state plate. He felt exultant gladness and pride while he walked, unnoticed, up the street, toward those fortunate who had been chosen. He was ready.
***
“Honey, someone’s knocking. Would you open the door, please? I’m busy with the meatloaf.” Her voice was like birds singing in spring-time. John fell in love with her voice immediately, the first time they met. And when she looked into his eyes…he knew. John was proud to be “husband to the most awesome gal in the universe.” His Emma.
He gazed in Helen’s room, their daughter born right before his job promotion, as if with her very presence she could make everything right for them. He paused to look at his daughter, caressing every single trait with his eyes. 
“Honey! The door…” Yes, the door. Who would be visiting on a Sunday evening? Sunday Night Football was about to start, John thought while he opened the door.
He believed he had seen this guy, before.
“Hi, I’m bringing you the gift.” The man said, and smiled. He didn’t hear the rest, when the Taser hit him.
“I’m bringing eternal love.”
***
John collapsed on the floor, shocked and shacking with multiple muscle spasms. It was painful, and he couldn’t breath properly. He gasped, “Oh God, please no, God!” was his last thought before losing consciousness.
The man was already handling his gun, the suppressor turned the firearm shot noise into a soft thump when Emma appeared from the kitchen, “John?!”
A little crimson flower appeared in the middle of her forehead. Emma slowly drifted to the floor, her back sliding against the door frame, as a velvet curtain closing the last act of an emotional opera, leaving a bright trace of her broken life, the color of love.
The man smiled with elation and paused to listen. The little girl hadn’t notice anything, yet. Sunday Night Football had just kicked-off. He turned to John, and took his large and thick hunter knife. The blade penetrated from the aortic opening, forcing the heart into ventricular fibrillation. He enlarged enough the gap to push one hand in and feel the last beats, mentally addressing a prayer and a benediction.
Helen was playing, waiting for Mom to call for dinner. She gave her back to the door and couldn’t see the man and his transfigured face. Nor she heard the blood dripping from his hand. The man ended her life as rapidly as her neck snapped in his hands.
***
“Jesus! What kind of psychopath could conceive such a show? They look like they are watching TV peacefully. Hugging each other and with dinner served!”
“We will get the bastard. We are tracking him down.”
The Coroner had just finished his distressing task. “At least neither the woman nor the child had suffered. Their death has been instantaneous, a clean job.” The Inspector looked at him in disgust. 
“What the heck, Frank, keep your remarks for your wife, will’ya?” 
“Well, the guy killed at the door step? He realized what was happening to him. He has all the signs of a stressful and traumatic death. That must have been horrible. He brought him to the couch after that…surgical operation he did.”
“Thank you, Frank. I guess we heard enough.”
“Sure, I’ll send you my report tomorrow.”
“Please, do.”
***
He had already changed plates, the road was long, but he only had to walk the path one step at a time. He thanked God to have blessed him with this mission. If only he and his family had received the same gift, before that fatal night… But the gateway to life is very narrow and the road is difficult, and only a few ever find it. “My thoughts are not your thoughts, nor are your ways My ways,” the Lord told him. Who was him to dispute?
Besides, who doesn’t hope to keep the miracle of love going on forever? A moment suspended in time, forever together. Wouldn’t you gift everyone with that? While driving, he looked briefly at the picture he took before he left. Love is forever.
 
 
Massimo Marino:
 
Massimo has a scientist background. He spent years at CERN and at the Lawrence Berkeley Lab in California, then had leading positions with Apple Inc. and the World Economic Forum. His debut novel “Daimones”, volume 1 of the “Daimones Trilogy”, is among the first listed for sci-fi and post-apocalypse on Amazon.
 
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November 16, 17, & 18

~~The Ups and Downs of Being Dead is free on Amazon~~

November 19

M.R. Cornelius, author of The Ups and Downs of Being Dead

November 26

Nephylim, author of Enigma

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Special Event: Wren Won the Versatile Blogger Award

Alison from Writing My Truth has nominated me for the Versatile Blogger Award, yayyy.

 

It is my first blog award ever, so I am very excited. Blogs are a lot of work to update multiple times a week, so I am glad someone enjoys to visit.

The rules state I must nominate 15 blogs/bloggers and tell the person who nominated me 7 things about myself.

Alison, here are seven things about me as requested.

7 Things about Wren Doloro

1. Wren Doloro is a pen name that took me a lot of time to find. I have always enjoyed the sight of wrens, and have come love the symbolism of the Wren in Celtic mythology–friendly, practical and creative.
2. Doloro comes from the Italian word ‘dolore’ which means pain, grief, or distress. To balance Wren’s cheerfulness, I feel like life has to be deep or a bit sad in order to find true happiness.
3. I love fire. All summer I love to light a big fire in the backyard. (It is pretty and keeps bugs away) And in winter, I light candles and incense.
4. I have two cats–Heidi, a Siamese and Slugg, a tabby. I’ve had Heidi since I was in high school. Slugg belongs to my boyfriend.
5. I really really like octopus. Just got a giant kraken shower curtain. I’m like half water, half fire.
6. My favorite cheeses are St. Andre (omg), Cabot extra sharp white cheddar, and pecorino. My Italian grandmother got me into pecorino, which is made from sheep’s milk.
7. The best decision I have made while moving is investing in a king size bed. It fits two people and two cats no problem!

So here are the nominees for the Versatile Blogger Award:



1. Angelina C Hansen— #WIPmadness hashtag coordinator on Twitter, big supporter of writers in all stages of their Work in Progress. I really enjoy having Angelina and the #WIPmadness ladies as a support net.

2. Ayala Rachelle— What a wonderful host for authors and bloggers! She posts interviews, reviews and guest posts. After blogging about Triberr, Ayala reached respond to my comment by inviting me into her Tribe. Thank you!

3. Misty Dietz from Chickswagger has a great site. It is fun and honest with a dash of naughty.

4. Larissa Reinhart is an expat living in Japan. In addition to being an indie author, Larissa has great receipes!

5. Live Write Thrive hosted by CS Lakin produces amazing articles and guest posts on writing that are filling up my toolbox.

6. Tonya Kappes gives out great advice for indie authors including really great marketing tips.

7. Laura Howard is a swell resource as well with great interviews. Laura you are so organized!

8. Lisa, Tarot Reader extraordinare, has so much information on her site: Tarotize. Bonus, she loves angels! (Me, too)

9. Thom Simonson, author of Trash. I really enjoy his posts actually, they are a bit edgy.

10. Erotica for all has to be the best erotic fiction site I’ve seen, with tons of paranormal and fantasy 😀

11. Tara Gentile is your lady for business and marketing tips for the New Economy.

12. Leonie Dawson is a business and creative goddess with a wacky sense of humor and cute life advice.

13. Rebecca Hamilton, author of the Forever Girl has a really classy site. Check it out especially if you like Young Adult or New Adult reading.

14. Russell Blake, author of many excellent Thrillers, gives good writing advice with a dash of sarcasm.

15. A certain friend of mine who shall go unnamed is a fashionista at Shoulder Strap, a twenty something’s shrine to accessories.

Some of my choices may be too busy to participate, but they are still great to visit 🙂

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Guest Post: M. A. Granovsky, author of Poison Pill

November is a new month for guestposts with an exciting new topic! M. A. Granovsky comes to speak her piece on Villains.


DECENT PEOPLE DOING EVIL THINGS
Stories about supervillains are of not much interest to me. A supervillain who is evil through and through faces no choices – he or she will always do harm. 

I am far more interested in how regular folk, you and me, make the decisions that we make in circumstances where the consequences of our choices cannot be predicted with certainty.
In my recently released legal thriller, POISON PILL, the protagonists, Benedict Vickers and Olga Mueller, break the law and engage in actions they know are likely to hurt innocent bystanders. Yes, they are trying to save lives, but their motives are not all pure, and there’s more than a little vengeance and comeuppance in their chosen method of achieving their goals. 
 
Are they heroes because they want to help some people, or villains because they want to destroy others?
Conversely, one of the antagonists, Peter Gardiner, a venture capitalist, has knowledge of the catastrophic events that are most likely to happen if he follows the business path he had chosen.  Yet these catastrophic events won’t occur for a few years, and there’s enough fuzziness in the data to allow plausible deniability – enough to convince himself that his acts will not lead to a calamity certain.

 

His is a sin of omission. By not changing his course, he is allowing harm to befall unknown others, people who are nameless and faceless to him.
 
Peter is not operating in a vacuum. He is facing pressures that reinforce his choice. He is managing billions in investor money and his investors want big returns. That’s what his able stewardship has conditioned them to expect. 
 
His fame and reputation rest largely on an almost uncanny ability to pick winning startup companies. If he were to do the right thing in view of what might happen down the road, he’d have to admit that he made a mistake in his picking, and perhaps even have a losing year. Investors are an unforgiving lot, and his venture funds may collapse. 

Moreover, what if the catastrophic events that are very likely to happen don’t? What if he causes all these losses to his investors, as well as the collapse of a wonderful startup, for no reason? 

So, for Peter, the risk in doing the wrong thing is somewhere in the misty future, while the risk in doing the right thing is immediate and very painful. Despite being a fundamentally good person, he chooses to do the wrong thing. 

Does this make him a villain? I don’t know, and it seems to be the question my readers are grappling with, too. It’s a conversation I often have about POISON PILL. 

As the creator of all these characters (who often feels more like a reporter as these characters come to life, do things, and I just scramble to write them down), I know that I set out to make Olga and Benedict the good guys and Peter the bad guy. It is rewarding to hear from readers that the lines blur and that they all come out looking more or less grey. 

In their quest, Olga and Benedict face inconveniences and downright danger. Peter originally doesn’t. I’d like to think that faced with the choices confronting them, I would act as my protagonists do. But I’m not sure. I don’t know whether I have their courage or the cowardice that makes decent people do evil things.
 
 
About Maria:
 
Maria Granovsky uses her background as a cancer biologist and lawyer, and her international travels, to craft fast-paced, intricately plotted capers, where the protagonists rely on their wits rather than their brawn, and the body count rises only as much as is necessary. She currently lives in New York City, but has lived in many other places, from the exotic (Wilmington, Delaware), to the normal (St. Petersburg, Jerusalem), to the entertaining (Florence — in a convent). While it’s difficult to be the new kid on the block repeatedly, this nomadic existence – in terms of geography and career – continues to yield a rich vein of thriller plots.
Maria’s Twitter handle is @MGranovsky

See Maria’s blog


Coming up in this series:

November 12

Massimo Marino, author of Daimones

November 16, 17, & 18

~~The Ups and Downs of Being Dead is free on Amazon~~

November 19

M.R. Cornelius, author of The Ups and Downs of Being Dead

November 26

Nephylim, author of Enigma

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November Guest Post Series on Villains

It’s a dark dark month, even with Daylight Savings Time. 

Here’s the rundown for November:

November 5

M. A. Granovsky, author of Poison Pill

November 12

Massimo Marino, author of Daimones

November 19

M.R. Cornelius, author of The Ups and Downs of Being Dead

November 26

Nephylim, author of Enigma

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Halloween October Full Moon pre #NaNoWriMo

Every Full and New Moon I do a personal post here on my blog. Note: NaNoWriMo tomorrow.

This month’s Full moon (Monday officially) is a very witchy moon due to the proximity to Halloween. There is a lot to do at this moment. It’a time for busy pagans, as we heathens believe this is the best time for certain kinds of magic.

The two weeks before and after Halloween, also known as Samhain, is a great time for spirit work. The veil between life and death is said to thin.

I do believe it is possible to connect with ancestors—to thank them, to remember those who have passed, and meditate on any problems you’d like their help with.

If you have ever wanted to do work with spirit guides–animals, angels, even plants–now is the time to start. Likewise if you’ve ever played around with runes, Tarot or other fun divination tool.

I have been meaning to do a few posts on this if anyone was interested, maybe on my other (neglected) art/spiritual/inspiration blog.

This special time of remembrance each year has been important to me.

I’ve never had a chance to know my mother. In fact for a long time I hated to mention her death which occurred I was three. It’s a bummer. I also lost my second grandfather two years ago.

Meditating on your ancestors is a great way to feel in touch, especially if you don’t have many memories.

My grandfather and I had a language barrier as he spoke a dialect of Italian—harder for me to understand than my other relatives. But in my meditation today that didn’t detract from our connection.

October has been jam packed, both on my blog–including the Bloghop contest ending tomorrow, my guest post over at Duolit, and my experimental Muse Cauldron inspiration project–and don’t get me started about my “real life.”

Yes, I do have one of those. Hurricane Sandy didn’t kill me nor did it harm the house or cats. Just buggered up my week is all, which is at the end of a long month.

And in a few minutes we shall begin, NaNoWriMo!!  Add me as a buddy, pleeease.

And little secret: NaNoWriMo helped me take the plunge to cut a ton of hours at my office job. Yayy! Still waiting for it to take effect, but soon. And just in time.

I am making more room for my passions—writing, reading and my massage business.

November come at me, I’m ready. I did some great character interviews, see the Duolit link. I have a new writing desk (to be hammered), and I’m even going for a trip up to my novel setting in a few weeks.

My story takes place in Philadelphia. The year after college Shay volunteers at a nonprofit since the economy sucks and she wants to change the world. Falls in love on the internet to American writer, Ralston, living in Hongkong. But when it turns out he is wealthy enough to visit her whole world changes.

K comps dying. ‘night

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YA Dystopian: Renegade by J.A. Souders – 4 Stars

 
 
Description:
 

Since the age of three, sixteen-year-old Evelyn Winters has trained to be Daughter of the People in the underwater utopia known as Elysium. Selected from hundreds of children for her ideal genes, all her life she’s believed that everything is perfect. Her world. Her people. The Law.

But when Gavin Hunter, a Surface Dweller, accidentally stumbles into Elysium’s secluded little world, Evelyn comes to a startling realization: Everything she knows is a lie.

Her memories have been altered.

Her mind and body aren’t under her own control.

And the person she knows as Mother is a monster.

Together with Gavin she plans her escape, only to learn that her own mind is a ticking time bomb…and Mother has one last secret that will destroy them all.

 
 
 
 
Review:

What a pleasure to read Renegade, the first novel of J.A. Souders. I am very impressed with this book, and I think it will appeal to many adults even though the story is marketed as YA. My thoughts:

1. Cool setting and potent characters—including one scary “Mother.”

Elysium is an underwater settlement enclosed in glass. Power is created using the heat of vents in the seafloor, oxygen created by breaking down water molecules. There are several Districts focused on different aspects of production (like the Hunger Games).

Mother is the name of the matriarch who rules the entire settlement. She is the guardian of Daughter of the People—I suppose someone she is grooming to be her heir, but who is not related by blood.

That doesn’t mean that “Mother” won’t pimp Evelyn out for “Coupling,” i.e. reproduction.

I really enjoy Evelyn’s perspective and I appreciate that the story stays with her the whole time. She and Gavin end up gallivanting around the settlement, and different locations are introduced gradually at a nice pace.

2. Did you say “Coupling?”

In Elysium, only those approved to become a Couple are allowed to touch each other. AT ALL. No hand holding, pushing hair out of someone’s face, no kissing, no groping, just no.

This makes the sexual tension in this book super high.

Evelyn’s Mother is quite eager to have her pass on her genes and basically forces her to choose a man. Creepy much? How about when Mother readies Evelyn to receive her choice in a black minidress that barely covers her hips, as well as a pair of black high heels.

It’s no surprise Evelyn is soon clomping around in those heels trying to escape her.

3. Great editing and a tight plot make this book a blast to read.

This story only took me a few nights to read—it even kept me up to ungodly hours of the morning.

There are several phrases that repeat through the book, and the second chapter begins in a similar way to the first. An example of this is “My life is just about perfect.”

These repetitions are used as a device to show how the memories of the main character have been altered. This is actually done very skillfully.

4. Great addition to YA literature.

Thank you wonderful editors and J.A. Souder! This book has been primed to its full potential.

This is the first YA, let alone YA dystopia, I have read that takes place underwater. This is really up my alley as I am writing a novel about mermaids. I would like to see more stories exploring underwater settings.

If you like Hunger Games, this is definitely one to check out. Although Renegade looks to be the first book in a series, the story is very cut to the essentials and could stand alone.

*This review has been given in exchange for a free ARC from Debut Author Challenge ARCs. Thank you!*

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