November is a new month for guestposts with an exciting new topic! M. A. Granovsky comes to speak her piece on Villains.
See Maria’s blog
Every Full and New Moon I do a personal post here on my blog. Note: NaNoWriMo tomorrow.
This month’s Full moon (Monday officially) is a very witchy moon due to the proximity to Halloween. There is a lot to do at this moment. It’a time for busy pagans, as we heathens believe this is the best time for certain kinds of magic.
I do believe it is possible to connect with ancestors—to thank them, to remember those who have passed, and meditate on any problems you’d like their help with.
If you have ever wanted to do work with spirit guides–animals, angels, even plants–now is the time to start. Likewise if you’ve ever played around with runes, Tarot or other fun divination tool.
I have been meaning to do a few posts on this if anyone was interested, maybe on my other (neglected) art/spiritual/inspiration blog.
I’ve never had a chance to know my mother. In fact for a long time I hated to mention her death which occurred I was three. It’s a bummer. I also lost my second grandfather two years ago.
Meditating on your ancestors is a great way to feel in touch, especially if you don’t have many memories.
My grandfather and I had a language barrier as he spoke a dialect of Italian—harder for me to understand than my other relatives. But in my meditation today that didn’t detract from our connection.
Yes, I do have one of those. Hurricane Sandy didn’t kill me nor did it harm the house or cats. Just buggered up my week is all, which is at the end of a long month.
And little secret: NaNoWriMo helped me take the plunge to cut a ton of hours at my office job. Yayy! Still waiting for it to take effect, but soon. And just in time.
I am making more room for my passions—writing, reading and my massage business.
November come at me, I’m ready. I did some great character interviews, see the Duolit link. I have a new writing desk (to be hammered), and I’m even going for a trip up to my novel setting in a few weeks.
My story takes place in Philadelphia. The year after college Shay volunteers at a nonprofit since the economy sucks and she wants to change the world. Falls in love on the internet to American writer, Ralston, living in Hongkong. But when it turns out he is wealthy enough to visit her whole world changes.
K comps dying. ‘night
Since the age of three, sixteen-year-old Evelyn Winters has trained to be Daughter of the People in the underwater utopia known as Elysium. Selected from hundreds of children for her ideal genes, all her life shes believed that everything is perfect. Her world. Her people. The Law.
But when Gavin Hunter, a Surface Dweller, accidentally stumbles into Elysiums secluded little world, Evelyn comes to a startling realization: Everything she knows is a lie.
Her memories have been altered.
Her mind and body arent under her own control.
And the person she knows as Mother is a monster.
Together with Gavin she plans her escape, only to learn that her own mind is a ticking time bomb…and Mother has one last secret that will destroy them all.
What a pleasure to read Renegade, the first novel of J.A. Souders. I am very impressed with this book, and I think it will appeal to many adults even though the story is marketed as YA. My thoughts:
Elysium is an underwater settlement enclosed in glass. Power is created using the heat of vents in the seafloor, oxygen created by breaking down water molecules. There are several Districts focused on different aspects of production (like the Hunger Games).
Mother is the name of the matriarch who rules the entire settlement. She is the guardian of Daughter of the People—I suppose someone she is grooming to be her heir, but who is not related by blood.
That doesnt mean that Mother wont pimp Evelyn out for Coupling, i.e. reproduction.
I really enjoy Evelyns perspective and I appreciate that the story stays with her the whole time. She and Gavin end up gallivanting around the settlement, and different locations are introduced gradually at a nice pace.
In Elysium, only those approved to become a Couple are allowed to touch each other. AT ALL. No hand holding, pushing hair out of someones face, no kissing, no groping, just no.
This makes the sexual tension in this book super high.
Evelyns Mother is quite eager to have her pass on her genes and basically forces her to choose a man. Creepy much? How about when Mother readies Evelyn to receive her choice in a black minidress that barely covers her hips, as well as a pair of black high heels.
Its no surprise Evelyn is soon clomping around in those heels trying to escape her.
This story only took me a few nights to readit even kept me up to ungodly hours of the morning.
There are several phrases that repeat through the book, and the second chapter begins in a similar way to the first. An example of this is My life is just about perfect.
These repetitions are used as a device to show how the memories of the main character have been altered. This is actually done very skillfully.
Thank you wonderful editors and J.A. Souder! This book has been primed to its full potential.
This is the first YA, let alone YA dystopia, I have read that takes place underwater. This is really up my alley as I am writing a novel about mermaids. I would like to see more stories exploring underwater settings.
If you like Hunger Games, this is definitely one to check out. Although Renegade looks to be the first book in a series, the story is very cut to the essentials and could stand alone.
*This review has been given in exchange for a free ARC from Debut Author Challenge ARCs. Thank you!*
I’m not a religious person, but I think somewhere in me I believe in my own kind of magic. The magic of suggestion, of wishful thinking, of believing, of wanting something so much that fate ends up giving it to you because it would be too great a tragedy for that dream to go unfulfilled. Of course, I know it doesn’t always work that way, and that’s why we call those great moments in life “miracles”.
I think most people believe in some kind of magic at some point in their life. I’m a bit surprised by my own beliefs sometimes, as I was raised already knowing that Santa Claus and the Easter Bunny were NOT real. You know, because my mom didn’t want to lie or keep secrets from me. Of course, I’ve come to realize life is rarely so simple, but that doesn’t change my belief in magic.
Though, for all the admonishing of such fantasies as bunnies with eggs full of candy and fat men in red suits who plop down the chimney you don’t own, my mom did have a few magic moments of her that she shared with me. She told me once about the time she flew. She ran across the field in front of my Grandma’s house every day with her arms spread and believed she could fly until one day her feet lifted off the ground and she ran through the air too long to call it a leap.
I won’t tell you how I spent my free time for months after that, but I’m sure you can guess. Yet, although I never did fly, I think there was some magic to be found in those moments as well. I’ve always had magic in my imagination. Magic that I believed was possible. Maybe that is what inspires my writing, too. Even when I write fantasy, my mind yearns for the idea that all of it could be somehow possible. That magic can be real. And I think in many ways it is.
So maybe the unicorns of my youth will never really show up. Maybe I’ll never be able to move objects with my mind or magically change my eye color. Maybe there are no secret crystals or amulets that will take me to another world or make me able see faeries. Maybe no amount of “believing” can make magic tangible thing, at least not all of the time. But sometimes magic brushes by you, touches your life in a way you can’t deny, and in that moment magic is real for you. And maybe sometimes all it takes is that magic being alive in your heart and mind.
For me, magic is hope that the impossible can happen. Sometimes just HOPING is magic enough. Sometimes you get a miracle. But I’ll never forget the magic of my youth, when anything was possible, when imagination was magic enough. And I’ll never leave those feelings behind. I’m keeping the magic with me.
If you need inspiration in the mean time, here are a few of my articles:
Witches of East End is a paranormal romance with mythic elements. By that I mean that many of the main characters–including Ingrid, Freya, and Joanna—are based on Nordic deities.
So check this out if you love Thor, Loki, Yggdrasil (the World Tree) and other Nordic stories.
Don’t worry, not everyone has a weird name. The story takes place in modern times and is very easy to follow.
Instantly from reading the story I was drawn to the writing. The prose is clear, and easy to read.
Witches alternates between the three sisters. The characters take turns telling the story. Often adding too many perspectives can dilute a novel, but here it is well done.
This is a good one for busy ladies because the chapters are really short!
Each character became dear to my heart. The sisters are very different and take up a classic archetype–virgin goddess (Ingrid the librarian), sex goddess (Freya the bartender) and mother (Joanna the babysitter).
There are some times I like a cliffhanger–when it creates more excitement for the next chapter, when hope exists beyond the obstacles.
I enjoyed the pace of Witches. By the time the ending swung around, I was really hoping for a happy ending.
And it was sorta happy. But the epilogue set things up for the next book, which promised to be full of even more tortuous conflicts.
Why could Melissa de la Cruz wait to introduce that in the second book of the series? I have no desire to read it now, because the I expect that the happy ending will be shattered completely.
And so, in this spirit of magic and masks, Alex and Melita, my hero and heroine, meet— through happenstance. Or so they think. Jeanette has other ideas—and she’ll see them through. 🙂
Natalie G. Owens got her first taste of serious writing by penning award–winning poetry, as well as feature articles for college and local publications, in her native Malta. She sold her first book to a small publisher in 2007 and is currently indie published. Her favorite stories to write are romances with a dark edge featuring brooding heroes, strong heroines, exotic settings, and a good dash of fantasy. Daydreaming tops her list of hobbies, followed by reading, cooking, traveling, sharing good times with family and friends, and ogling shoe store displays. You can find out more about Natalie and her work on her website.
Rebecca Hamilton, author of The Forever Girl and Her Sweetest Downfall.
I absolutely love the energy of NaNoWriMo. I think it helps many people out there make their dreams reality by providing an extra push of motivation.
This will be my third Nano year; my first was in 2009. It is the kind of challenge you can push yourself to overcome year after year. And each year you learn new things along the way, develop new stories haunting your brain, and make new friends.
My best advice besides doing some plotting (see my post, I make it fun), is:
1. Look at your schedule and figure out what days you can write. Identify what time of day you need to get your butt in the chair and make it an appointment with yourself.
Do the math and set your goal for each session.
Make a spreadsheet to enter your daily wordcount. ——link to 7 ways to write everyday
OR Mark the goal on your calendar and give yourself a sticker every day you complete the goal 🙂
2. Aim to write more than necessary in the beginning of the month to give yourself a buffer.
Don’t sacrifice your health or sanity to finish NaNo. There will be days you just can’t make the goal.
Use the excitement of the first week to propel you forward. This will give you some wiggle room.
But don’t get cocky! Stepping away from your novel for a few days may mess up your long term productivity.
3. Use social media like twitter or facebook to make friends. See who is talking about and who likes NaNoWriMo and message people who look interesting.
Having other people Nano alongside you is what makes this month so special. You aren’t alone in your journey–others will inspire you, question you, and motivate you to reach the finish line.
So don’t be afraid to reach out. Ask about another’s novel—we all have at least 50,000 words to say about it!
4. Remember planning is an ongoing process.
If you haven’t had a chance to plot your novel (link), you may find yourself battling between several idas as you write. Characters come in and out, settings are all over the world, what was the point of the story again?
Don’t be too hard on yourself. Messy drafts are part of the NaNo experience. Just keep seeking the good stuff: the drama and the conflict. Less philosophizing inside the characters head.
It is never too late to do a bit of plotting. I recommend using the last days before NaNoWriMo in doing just that, and also to take a moment several times throughout the month to figure out where you are going with your novel.
5. Focus on your Sentence.
Think about your novel page on NaNoWriMo— it allows you a whole area to tell people the summary of your novel. Make the best blurb possible and it will guide you through the whole month and beyond in revision.
Remember you need a protagonist, antagonist, conflict, setting, and the best books have a twist. Through the month, carve the sentence down to as few words with the most meaning.
(Holly Lisle post?)
Have so much fun this November! x Wren